Nagoya Writes

May 28, 2016

May Review

Filed under: Open Reading Minutes — show1miyamura @ 9:23 am

May 2016 Open Reading Review

This month the Open Reading had a better turnout. Crowded?
No, just right for giving each work time for a read, a discussion and helpful suggestions for improving.

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Shoichi Miyamura ( Japan )

~ “Adam’s Apple” ~
The bone was the last one I picked up from my father at the crematory,
and that one got stuck in my throat.

~ “Utraman” by Katsumi Sugawara ~
A child has only a future as I only have a past.

Albert Sussler ( USA )

~ “Reflections of a Mirror” ~
Watch carefully without watching.

Hidemi Ohba ( Japan )

~ “Forces of Nature” ~
Sounds reassuring yet haunting at the same time.

Bertram Mullin ( USA )

~ “Words Writers overuse: in poetic lexicographical form” ~
Smart ass, smile, smirk, soft, same, somewhat so.

~ “Zeta” ~
shivering skin, tingling nerves, an excess twist.

Yu Kawamura ( Japan )

~ “Final Fantasy Five” ~
Emptiness banished to other dimensions.

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Coming up:

June 19th: Sunday
Open Reading: from 3:00 ~ 5:00P.M.
Near subway Tsukijiguchi station

Map to the venue: Please see our Facebook Group page.

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Help to spread the word.

Albert

 

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